The Blistering Afternoon
63In the blistering afternoon of a miracle
He sits in stunned silence, not recognizing his surroundings.
In the shadows are secrets unrevealed,
A mysterious blemish that must exist
Through the lens of the miracle.
How does the seasoned protector, the once hero
Regain the stature of that untarnished visage?
Both the advance and retreat unwelcome.
He withdraws with contemplative agony.
There is no wrinkle in the aging of affection.
It stays steadfast and uncompromising
Teaching its possessor more than ever imagined.
There must be a bridge, a connecting pathway
That exists beyond the scope of knowing.
A touch of magic, a sprinkling of inspiration.
The unwavering, uncompromising breath of love
Leaves its searing imprint
With the promise that the depth of the heart
Will triumph over anger and disappointment
And deliver the resonant perfection of truth
Which is the true and unspoiled miracle.
The evening beckons, it's unhurried whisper
Teases with its wise and seasoned perspective.
It settles, comfortably and sound
With an affectionate smirk and a patient touch
Into its awaiting perch, rocking back and forth,
Revealing itself through a rhythmic and peaceful creak.
There is no knowing, no prediction
Only a steadiness that comes from experience.
In the dusk comes perspective
The darkness of night promises enlightenment.
The magnificent obsession of steadfast altruism
and incorruptible love
In the light of day reveals itself as the truest magic.
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I am stunned at your compelling use of imagery and metaphor.
"The magnificent obsession of steadfast altruism
and incorruptible love
In the light of day reveals itself as the truest magic."
And I don't stun easily. Superb poetry.
Incredibly deep and meaningful, beautiful poetry.
Thank you and voted up
What a moving and artistically superb poem!
Thank you for enriching my day with your words.
Voted up and shared.
Sannel
very nicely done. My favorite part is : "With the promise that the depth of the heart
Will triumph over anger and disappointment" It is so hard to triumph over anger! Awesome and voted up...you have inspired me to write some more poems. You are welcome to read some of mine:=)) Please keep writing.
I'm thinking a song, Greg! Absolutely beautiful. A descriptive reflection on your feelings accompanied by the beauty of the desert make this composition simply perfect.
I love poetry my profile is mostly poems.I have to say ,This was a great one!!!














writer20 Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago
This is a great poem. Voted up, beautiful and awesome.